5.25.2015

Monday Madness: S1. P2.

TA DAAA. I am here with part 2 of the story me and Hannah are co-writing. We have decided to title it Monday Madness. And we both post every other Monday. She wrote part one, I wrote part two (this post here), and then next Monday she will write part three, and so forth. If you want to read part one, go - here -  I'm also going to post a page on my blog titled "Monday Madness" where I will be linking to each post. *thumbs up* I am sooooooooooo excited. I HOPE YOU ENJOY. 

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I decided to use this photo because I cOULDN'T FIND ONE TO FIT THE STORY AHH 
Cops? Distracted. Dave Jones? Dead. Or pretty much close to it. I really never did like that guy. He sweat too much when he was nervous. I learned not to start panicking when I was nervous. In fact, I rarely ever got nervous.... okay, lie. But you learned that way back in training anyway.

I wove through the crowd that stopped to stare. No one was watching me, but rather the distraction-and-kill team. I made it to Keilah, tapping her on the shoulder. Her eyes were full of fear and shock. I grabbed her hand, practically yanking her arm out of socket as I hurried away.

Past the crowd, through BabiesRUs, and to the car, I ran the instructions through my head. They were short and easy to follow, but I couldn't mess this mission  up. It was my first and hopefully not my last. I just needed to get to the end.

"Where are we going?" Keilah asked, trying to breathe evenly. "And who are you? Why did they kill that guy?"

"I'm Jon."I glanced back at her. "And that's just part of the plan. Besides, that 'guy' almost killed you." 

"He did not even almost kill me," Keilah snorted. 

I stopped, seeing BabiesRUs running with the police. 

"Darn it," I mumbled under my breath. Keilah bumped into me, not expecting the sudden stop.

"What is it?" She asked.

"Police."

"Wait, what?!? I thought you were the police. Who are you? Are you holding me hostage?"

I winced. "Sorry," I said, pulling a needle out of my pocket and inserting it into her neck before she could react. "I can't let this mission fail." Imagine that, letting your objective run away to the police who you were trying to get away from. 

Keilah fell limp in my arms and then the black suburban showed up.

"About time," I muttered, lifting Keilah up from the ground with ease. Actually, she was a lot heavier than I thought she was and it was hard. But I pretended like it was easy. 

The door opened and Carl, a skinny dude with buff arms and a head too big for his body, hopped out. I jumped in, noticing the cops near BabiesRUs were starting to come over. Beowulf, the dog, barked happily once he saw Keilah. I felt like some big hero, holding the unconscious girl in my arms and getting into the 'burban. 

My head hit the top of the vehicle and I groaned. Carl snickered, hopping in beside me and closing the door.

"Floor it, June," Carl yelled, whooping. The cops had just arrived at the scene, and more were coming on behind us. 

The suburban lurched, throwing Keilah wildly to the back of the seat. I winced. She was going to wake up with a million bruises. Thrown around in a wild car escape plus getting hit by Dave... Yeah, no. That was not anyone's ideal day. 

Join Hannah next Monday for part 3. *grins* 

18 comments:

  1. This is absolutely amazing. I love it <3

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  2. You knocked out Keilah? THAT IS NOT OKAY OKAY. But still I love it! I can't believe I have to wait another week for the installment, though... it's like me and checking out books in a series. If it's not in the library and I'm in the middle of a series then I get super restless.

    xoxo Morning

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    1. WELL I HAD TO. SHE WAS GOING TO RUN AWAY AND THINK I WAS EVIL OR SOME CRAZY THING. eaphphhp. me and Hannah are evil. have fun waiting. ;-)

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  3. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH SO GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDD EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK can't wait until next Monday!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    1. SEGKHU DID YA DID YA LIKE IT. I WAS SUPER NERVOUS BECAUSE I THOUGHT IT SUCKED BECAUSE I RARELY EVER WRITE ACTION SCENES????????? XDDD I can't wait for you to post so I can enjoy the storyyyy. I'm glad you write it with me because I feel as if my parts suck. XD

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  4. Okay I just laughed so hard that I kinda feeling like throwing up and yelling FLOOR IT JUNE. Because who does that? YOU DO. And I love you too much.

    Wow. Okay.

    xoxo

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    1. *dies so much*

      COMMENTS LIKE YOURS MAKE MY DAY. AAGHHHHHHH.

      I LOVE YOU TOO MUCH. <3 eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep.

      just wait til Hannah posts and probably makes June totally awesome. *grins*

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    1. GOOD. *dances* That means I did good this time around. XD

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  6. omg. *snort* Jon's an idiot.

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    1. I HAD TO DO IT BECAUSE IT WAS FUNNY AND HE IS TOTALLY ME XD

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  7. Okay. Wow. GOSH! I? am a horrible reader. *feels like Rapunzel sitting in a cave, pouting* Aaaack I have missed like every single installment of this story?! How is that possible?! Ahem. I am literally going to comment on every single one of these, because gosh. :P I was really confused for a second here, but I think I understand now. Okay. Here we go.

    OMG I LOVE YOUR WRITING STYLE. (Just sayin’, even though I think I already said it a million times heh.) OH OH and I think I’m going to love this Jon character. <3 “"Wait, what?!? I thought you were the police. Who are you? Are you holding me hostage?"” <<< THIS LINE. Gahhh. I love it. Yikes!!! Where is he taking this girl?! I shall head over to Hannah’s blog and see.

    love,
    abbie

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    1. HAHAH. I am so sorry. But yes, I am so glad you're joining us! *rubs hands together*

      YESSSSSSSSS THANK YOU. I love Jon a whole lot. Keilah is just as awesome. I am so glad they were stuck together.

      I'll head on over there too read your comment. ;-)

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