and the words echo beneath this old ground.
they shatter who i was and i can hardly stand the loss --
no. please.
come back. it's not too late. i promise it'll be okay.
but i see the look in your eyes
and i know deep down that this is the part where we
both let...
go.
trust me.
i am. i will.
just one thing --
promise me you'll never doubt that i love(d) you.
i pinky promise.
(his laugh is sad
and the trees even bend lower)
i love you too.
xx
p.s.
This is lovely. I adore how you have written this.
ReplyDeleteIt reminds me of a current sisuation I am having where I don't say bye but have trouble telling someone that I have always loved them and no matter what it will always be true.
"i am. i will.
just one thing --
promise me you'll never doubt that i love(d) you."
This right here explained everything.
www.itssimplyme.com
darling. that's the hardest thing, but it'll be okay.
Deletesomehow. i promise.
MISSED YOU. thanks for stopping by. xx <333
*chokes on saliva*
ReplyDelete*does the heimlich*
Delete"sometimes you die of a broken heart
ReplyDeleteand then
you know it'll be okay.
hope is a precious thing."
i'm going to hang that up on my wall or something right now. i seriously feel like that sums up so much of my life lately, and wow. Hope. The hope that is found in absolutely nothing else but God. It's shaped my life.
OWWWW. I know I know. "absolutely nothing else but God" EXACTLY. there's a hope that is so strong and unquenchable in Him and it just makes everything else seem so small and jstuwsawefi. he's good. there's no doubt about it. missed you, Autumn. <33
Delete>insert cartoon of crying where the tears are literally shooting out of your face in a fountain<
ReplyDeleteI DIED LAUGHING. OH MY GOODNESSSS.
Deleteso true though <3
Everything that you write leaves me with the most bittersweet, nostalgic feeling. <3
ReplyDeletei think that describes my inside personality amirite. u feeling me. cry. missed you so much. Grace Annee. <3 xx
Deletesometimes you also die from reading your words but its all so good
ReplyDeletetru.
Deleteexcept reversed because i adore your writing, u feel? loves, olivaaaa. <33 missed you LOTS. xx
gah this was just so beautiful and i'm so in awe and jealous of your poetry writing talent IT'S JUST SO GOOD. I have so much love for it.
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auwehfhahwh CRYING. you. my goodness. no stinking words. <333
DeleteHey Cally! I just wanted to let you know that I enjoyed this post, so I shared it on Featured Friday for this week. You are such an amazing writer! I love your poems!
ReplyDeleteHave a great weekend! :)
With love and all joy,
Allie D.
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WHAAAT. THAT IS SO KIND. checking it out right now, sweet girl. xx
Deletei love your writing so much aaahhh <3 that bit about God's promises rooted in everything we are... those words are something to hold close. and that postscript!! *heart eyes* sometimes feel like that's the story of my life.
ReplyDeleteandrea i've missed you so mucHHH. yes yes yes. you understand. *hugs you tight* LOVE YOU. thanks for stopping by. xx <3 <3 <3
Deletethis is so beautiful and my heart hurts now and i cannot handle this.
ReplyDeleteowieeeee. i know. i know. but i guess pain makes us realize that there are some things out there worth hurting for? <3 xx
DeleteTHESE SUNSET PHOTOS THOUGH.
ReplyDeleteand your writing.....
D R E A M T E A M
Randy Abby
WAKE ME UP Blog
IS THAT MY HEART SCREAMING OF LOVE.
Deleteit must be.
xx
thank you, Abby.