He was a grey-eyed thief
She was a hazel-eyed photographer
He always managed to dodge the camera
But she didn't mind
Some memories didn't belong in pictures
Some memories stayed in your heart
They'd shoot across the sky and never return
You'd always remember them
That was all they were
A memory
But the thief didn't mind
As long as the hazel-eyed girl was beside him
She was his moon
And he was her sun
They didn't notice the trail of
stardust and sunlight
stardust and sunlight
that they left when they were
g
o
n
e
And only a few people noticed it.
Like the blond-haired boy who smelled of metal and forgotten books.
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❤
This is so good. *shivers*
ReplyDeleteWhenever you post, it's like... day = made. It's almost as if you're sitting right beside me laughing over something dumb I said and spewing lines of poetry with your breathing.
I just want you to know how thankful I am that you are you and that you don't mind being around a silly girl like me. Because friends are crazy awesome.
*hug*
Yes, yes, yes. I love you so much. And I love everything you say because it's all funny and amazing. XDD
DeleteI LOVE YOU, HANNAH JOY. WOO.
Eeee!!!!!!!! This is beautiful! <3 <3
ReplyDeletep.s. Thank you for posting your last post. I've been feeling the exact same way lately, and it's nice to know that I'm not alone. <3 You have encouraged me beyond belief. God has given you such a precious gift for writing.
And it truly is a beautiful thing to see you share your gift to praise our Savior. ♥
Eve, what evene are yo asdjf doing. *dies* Write until your heart stops beating. Write even when all words seem lost. Write, my dearest Eve, for I want to read every single word.
DeletePraise God. <3 <3 <3
♥ God has given you an amazing talent that continues to bless others! ♥
ReplyDeleteAhhhhhhhh! Thank you and thank God. He somehow placed this precious gift in my hands. My calloused hands.
DeletePlease tell me I am the hazel eyed girl, and Ben is the grey-eyed thief <3 <3 <3
ReplyDeleteYour work is amazing, Candence! Like I'm dying of feels.
YOU AREEEEEEEEEEEEE. I LOVE IT. SHIPPING IT UNTIL THE WORLD BLOWS UP MAN.
DeleteFeels over your own ship.
I am dead, Jordy.
This is intriguing. I feel like you could write a novel about this, it's a story that goes off the page. :)
ReplyDeleteThe thief is actually in my Camp Nano story!! I am so happy and just augysdhfklsj that you think that because it is. It is! Man. Woo. Thank you, Jo!
DeleteWhoooooHOOOOOOOOOOOALWEIHFL. That was just the scream of a dying star exploding because your words killed it.
ReplyDeleteMan oh man.
♥
can you even lief
Deleteso funny
this comment is
Thanks, my dear Addy!
Whoa. Do you know my life story? This piece is literally my life story; a lot of posts are. O-O
ReplyDeletexoxo Morning
WHAAAAAAAT. Hilarious. I love your life then. ;-D
DeleteOoooooooh, yes. I like this a lot. Beautiful. :)
ReplyDeleteDying.
DeleteThank you sososoosos much!!!
Beautiful, gives you shivers. Please tell me how you come up with this magic, you're my writing goals! Seriously everything you write is wonderful! <3
ReplyDeleteHonestly, I have no idea. God just puts the words in my hands and they just jump and laugh and dance until they're woven into their story.
DeleteYour comment made my entire day. What even. <3
Eeek, I love this. It's absolutely perfect <3
ReplyDeleteAHhhhhh! Thank you, Lorraine! <3
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ReplyDeletehow do you even do this? i'm SO mind-blown. I LOVE IT. literally gave me shivers even though it's a really hot evening over here. you're amazing xxx.
oh, honey, i just read your previous post and trust me, i feel you. i read through every single word, and you just condensed whatever i have been feeling in the past few weeks into words. you are a copy, yes, but you are a copy of the image of our Father. if it helps, think of it in this way, we are all broken people, who had our lives shattered and picked up and shattered again. we are all raw, hurting people, who look too much to ourselves and not enough to God. think about yourself like the moon. you're the sun of night, a image, a copy of the sun, that exists to reflect the true Son. i know i'm probably not making sense because i'm rambling and everything is just coming out, but please don't look at your writing and go "ew," because it has blessed me so, so much. and God has given you a talent for a reason. inspiration is drawn from everywhere, everyone, everything.
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xxx.
ELISABETH. CAN YOU HEAR MY SOUL. IT'S LIKE DYING. I AM DYING. EVERYTHING IS DYING. Your comment = life.
Deletethankyouthankyouthankyou
I, unfortunately, do not have much to say. But I am going to keep these comments forever and ever and ever. Agshdfhakbudbhijjhhggggg. Thank you! <3 <3 <3
Oh my gosh. This is truly so beautiful. I love your writing so much. <3
ReplyDeleteAhfhdljn. Thank you to the moon and back, Cindy girl. Means the world. <3
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