3.18.2015

midnight rain

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the smell of rain touched my soul
and i rushed to the door, opening it quickly
my bare feet touched the cement
and the sprinkle of rain, my skin

- be still, my soul, it's almost time. -

i waited for it to start falling heavier
i waited for the sky to start crying with my soul
but it just slowed, seemingly scared of me
please, my heart screamed

 - not yet, my eager soul, not yet. -

and so i stopped, breathing in one last smell
waiting one last second
come on, come on

- wait -

i woke up in the middle of the night,
glancing out the window,
and my soul leaped with joy
when i saw the midnight rain
dancing ever so gracefully

- it is time to let go, darling, and let your soul fly. -




18 comments:

  1. *dies forever and forever and forever because she loves you so terribly*

    xoxo

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    1. *dies too because I don't want to live without my Addy girl and so we can be dead together and making jokes in our graves XDDD*

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  2. I KNOW. WE WERE DRIVING. AND IT WAS RAINING. AND THE SOUND OF RAIN ON THE METAL ROOF.

    AND THE NIGHT RAIN.

    And now it's snowing but I don't mind because

    IT'S SPRING BABAY.

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    1. WHAHAFM. I LOVE THAT TOO, BUT I HAVEN'T FELT IT IN A LONG TIME. LIKE WHAT IS LIFE. <3 <3 <3 SPRING BABAY.

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  3. THE PERFECTION!!!
    UGH! CANDENCE! YOU'RE KILLIN' ME!

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    1. HAHAHAHAHHAHA OH MAN. JORDY, HAVE YOU LOOKED IN THE MIRROR LATELY? BECAUSE I'M PRETTY SURE YOU ARE THE AMAZING ONE. <3

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  4. Stop being soooo perfffectt <3333

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  5. GIRLIE IS IS JUST oh my gosh I'm crying here. :,',',',(

    xoxo Morning

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    1. Mudsifdsa. To make one cry with writing is the greatest honor, Morning. Thankyouthankyouthankyou. <3

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    1. Autumn = THE BEST. <3 <3 *dies of love*

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  7. This is amazing, my friend. With every one of your poems, I become more and more in awe of your gift. I don't know how you do it but each passing word you write is truly beautiful and full of meaning --it fills my soul. <3

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    1. Eve. Oh my darling Eve. <3 <3 <3 You are so amazing and just... thank you. I am just.. I can't even speak. Thank you so much. Jwhsfuil. <3

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  8. SO beautiful with so much emotion, in love <3

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  9. lovely. and the magic of rain...

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