10.29.2015



calloused lungs beating against scrambled letters.
cannot get it right, cannot get it right.
just hum along instead, fingers leading the way.
up and down the fret, mind wandering.
watch the golden morning slip away.
rest the weary lungs for awhile.
let the sun turn to dusk behind the mountains,
reaching over to the last light of the day.
there are more chances tomorrow.


p.s. bombard Adelaide and tell her to do Love Overflowing on Monday. ;-)

24 comments:

  1. *screams in the distance* I love it. I l o v e it. Seriously, your writing is <3 <3

    ~Noor

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    1. *screams in the distance* Noor is amazing. Too a m a z i n g for me. Eeek. ♥♥ Thanks, you wonderful girl.

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  2. Woahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

    so when did you get all the skills, girl?

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    1. *tight hug*

      when you started injecting them into my brain. ♥♥

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  3. BAM.
    you've done it again, you precious lil' soul <3<3
    so much adoration for you and your writing xx

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    1. p.s. bombarding addy - check ;) heh xx

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    2. DIES FOREVER. thank you. we gotta bombard that girl. *grins* ♥♥

      I LOVE YOU SO MUCH. you are the SWEETEST. oh man, it makes my heart scream of happiness. ♥buckets of love to you.

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  4. Wow, I love this. The picture reminds me of how much I am loving how to learn guitar right now :)

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    1. GUITAR. man, I love it until I gotta tune it. Then we're both crying (me and the guitar). Thanks lovely girl ♥♥

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  5. Gorgeous shot. Sometimes music makes more sense than words.

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    1. Thank youuu. ♥ It does it does it does. Acoustic is my soul-song.

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  6. you're the worst. AND I LOVE YOUR PRECIOUS FACE. *squishes your cheeks* this was so so good. so so sosososoosogood like i cannot even figure anything out anymore. <3 you're a miracle, cabbage.

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    1. always. ;-) YOU ARE A GRANDMA SCREAMS STOP SQUISHING MY CHEEKS THOSE WERE MADE FOR EATING ♥♥♥ you da best, greenbean.

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    2. always. ;-) YOU ARE A GRANDMA SCREAMS STOP SQUISHING MY CHEEKS THOSE WERE MADE FOR EATING ♥♥♥ you da best, greenbean.

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    1. if poems had feelings, this one would love you right back, sweet pea. ♥♥

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  8. WHY DID I NOT SEE THIS POST.
    I LOVES IT.
    *dies*

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    1. AM I BLIND
      because girl you're a sight i wish i could see.

      *does that even make sense**

      *i just made it up*

      *because it was a pun about not seeing*

      *whoops*

      AND I LOVE YOU, JORDAY GIRL. ♥ forevs.

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  9. I love this so much!! Your way with words is amazing :)

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  10. This is really, really good. I love you, girl.

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    1. it perfectly describes me all the time. muahah.

      And I will always love you, crazy chicken lady. ♥♥ But you already knew that. *hugs*

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