the vibrations in your seat
the words forming melodies in your ears
an image in your mind
close your eyes
the wrong string plucked,
but the music continues
even more beautiful
breathe
the wrong key on the piano
a fallen boy
but it makes it real
look up
vulnerable, tired, almost gone
the wrinkles in his eyes tell you about it
a reflection of yourself that you didn't know
and then a sob breaks his lips
it's okay
and tears escape mine
i don't know why it happens
or why it spoke to me so much
but it did
pray for freedom
freedom
i'm a broken weary soul
held back by things unseen
chains i've grown so accustomed to
and some woman out there
is battling the same battle
different circumstances,
but the fight is still the same
let's go Home, dear.
travel that beaten path.
Wow. O-O
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A good wow, I hope. <3
DeleteI noticed all of this and I love your adorable face and I loved listening to you talk about simple things over chicken fried steak. ♥
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That chicken fried steak was good. Mmmhmm. I AM CRY BECAUSE I COULDN'T EAT IT. WAAA. So much food.
DeleteI loved it, man. So much. Yes, yes, yes. <3
woah...
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Deletei love new look of your blog!
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Aw, thank you! It's not completely new; just a few changes. I love it, too!
DeleteLong live the Queen of Iowa. <3
ReplyDeleteSO MUCH YES. That is my favorite song by Andrew Peterson. A+ song foreverrrrr.
DeleteLove your new theme and this is one of the most beautiful things I've read in a while <3
ReplyDeleteAw, thank you! It's not a new theme, but just a few changes. :-)
DeleteBut thank you so much, Arushee. That makes me so darn happy.
Amazing as always. :) also, I'm loving this new design, it's sweet and simple!
ReplyDeleteHahaa! Thank you, thank you. It's just a few things changed, but it's even more nice, yeah? :-)
DeleteThis is beautiful, my dear Candence. Wherever did such an idea come from?
ReplyDeleteJordaayy. Thank you! I went to an Andrew Peterson on the 2nd. It made me sob and everything. Like... so good. There's too much to say in a little comment and I don't think I'll make a post. But it was so stinkin' good. Queen of Iowa is the song. You can look it up if you want.
DeleteThissssss CANDENCE. Give me writing lessons. You know. Just come over to my house, eat cookies and teach me to spin spiraled galaxies of beautiful words with my pen.
ReplyDeleteThis was amazing, and I loved it.
SCREAM. WHAT. *dies* Tane, I don't think I'd be able to teach you. I don't think I'd be able to muster up enough of anything to give you. Because I seriouslycan'twritethatwell. Oh man. I collect the lost things, the given words, the forgotten ones. I collect the broken and thrown away words. With every step you and others take, I'm behind you, collecting the words. So I don't know what to tell you, Tane. You already hold the power in your hands and I'm just the dust sweeper. You already have the power to write.
DeleteBUT I LOVE YOU. THANK YOU FOR THIS COMMENT. UGH. *hugs it to death and you too*
This is so beautiful!!! Elizabeth (from Whimsical Thoughts) is a really good friend of mine, and she has totally gotten me on to you! I love your words- very poetic :) Thank you for sharing your heart on this piece of the internet!
ReplyDeleteAwww. She is so kind! It's my pleasure to share it. I'm ever so thankful for you to accept it, though. <3
Deletethese words are so lovely.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your kind comment on my blog. :)
Xoxo
thank you. <3
DeleteYesss, no problem. It was my pleasure.
Beautiful. <3
ReplyDeleteThank you! <3
DeleteLOVE.
ReplyDeleteTHANKS, NINE.
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